Reinterpreting a Roz Chast cartoon

I wanted to give the in-class assignment from week 2 a better try. So here's the original "Waldo's Parents" cartoon from the May 7, 2018 New Yorker magazine, and below it, my new version. I know the perspective on the sidewalks and street is incorrect (I tried 3x...sigh). Any other feedback would be awesome and appreciated. Thanks!